Monday 14 March 2011

Feedback on rough cut

- More shots needed to link existing shots. This will make the storyline clearer to the viewer.
Shots needed:
- Establishing shot of outside of pub
- Inside of the pub, busy
- Empty pub
- Locking doors of the pub
- Shot of door when dog is barking
- Molly walking from the bar to the table
- Dad talking about ghost
- More point of view shots

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